After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Mr. Helper,
My name is Tom Cruse and I am writing this letter to thanking you for saving my life from the dangerous accident I had encountered last week near Brampton.
Last week, I was travelling to my uncle's house in Brampton from the Toronto where I live and in the mid-way, my car's break failed working and I just ram-through the tree nearby. I got fainted after that strong hit on my head and did not remember anything after that.
However, I opened my eyes in the hospital bed which was surrounded by my family members. I thought that they could have brought me here. But, later on I was informed by the doctor that you brought me here and informed my family. I really appreciate your gesture and would like to give you a small treat at my home with your family.
Finally, I know that it would not work with a small thanks giving for me and so, I need you to please visit my home for the treat with your family. You can call me on 9876543210 and I will make you understand my address there.
I am waiting for your call.
Yours faithfully,
Tom Cruse
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37810945274 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31538461507 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1780301601 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224475803606 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918571242001 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655015169189 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123715664976 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507992403231 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.