A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post You want to thank him her Write a letter to your friend In your letter Say how you felt when you received the present Describe what you like about it Explain how you will use the present

Essay topics:

A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Say how you felt when you received the present
- Describe what you like about it
- Explain how you will use the present

My dearest Chris,

Hi. Hope you are well.

On Saturday I received a package from Canada. You can’t imagine how I was excited, when I saw that it was from Canada.
I opened the box and found beautiful silk scarf you have sent me for my birthday. I was really surprised and truly delighted with your present.
Thank you so much!!
You haven’t forget my taste in colors. The mix of blue and grey looks so wonderful and the silk material feels so soft and looks very beautiful on me. I can’t enough thank you for your attention. I am going to wear the scarf these weekends and will ask my friends to take a photo of mine and send that you.
So thank you once again and Give my regards to your folk but lots of love to you and Peter.
I will write you soon and send that photo.
Best wishes,

Mehriban

Votes
Average: 6.3 (6 votes)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'well']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196721311475 0.220444632235 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.153005464481 0.167888034529 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655737704918 0.0606518309736 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0601092896175 0.0506257000042 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.158469945355 0.118615021944 134% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0710382513661 0.107062808482 66% => OK
Participles: 0.0218579234973 0.041066498444 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.23886649693 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218579234973 0.0385302599488 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0437158469945 0.0714148451538 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0218579234973 0.0191574576366 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0109289617486 0.00930345855455 117% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 822.0 1141.60824742 72% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.134020619 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33766233766 5.53046319177 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78085437643 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.220779220779 0.284621296913 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.168831168831 0.211203875043 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11038961039 0.133321485273 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0649350649351 0.0843313296314 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23886649693 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.622163163488 99% => OK
Word variations: 54.9995338235 62.8969750728 87% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.4300151701 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0724137775 44.7399317507 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7142857143 90.9928171075 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0 16.4300151701 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.613754768223 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 27.8831168831 37.5504026743 74% => OK
Elegance: 0.779411764706 1.13073093955 69% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341175440784 0.331212695627 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0582640132191 0.0927372745006 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0935734112498 0.0736520305886 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630881712092 0.579516596996 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.238581749491 0.180689518051 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132721296339 0.122183219658 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833241763912 0.0765303033291 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.193121334599 0.211926503985 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.133232520237 0.0737400523855 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188933123656 0.203819188451 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036113572564 0.067151250289 54% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.45360824742 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 8.32989690722 60% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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