On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter-Describe the item you lost-Explain how you lost it-Tell insurance com

Essay topics:

On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing you, in regard of loss of my favorite necklace.

I was on long vacation for (10 days) in one of the 5 stars hotel. Each evening hotel authorities hold some interesting parties, quizzes and entertain the people. On the last day they hold a wonderful party with live music. That evening I was worn my valuable necklace. After the party I remember that I took off the necklace and as I prepared to come back, I put it to my pocket for valuable things. When I returned home and open my pocket, the necklace wasn’t there. I was upset with this loss, as it had a sensible value for me.

As I was insured by your company, I would like to ask you to cover the cost of the lost. My insurance number is AX2255. The necklace was gold with some diamonds. I can send you all related details and also the passport of the product if it is needed.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you in advance.

Yours faithfully,
Rahimova Mehriban

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Rahimova Mehriban
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22009569378 0.220444632235 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.167888034529 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0478468899522 0.0606518309736 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0239234449761 0.0506257000042 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.138755980861 0.118615021944 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11961722488 0.107062808482 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0478468899522 0.041066498444 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44712363932 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239234449761 0.0385302599488 62% => OK
Particles: 0.00478468899522 0.00132118243153 362% => OK
Determiners: 0.0861244019139 0.0714148451538 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00956937799043 0.0191574576366 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00478468899522 0.00930345855455 51% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 984.0 1141.60824742 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.134020619 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37704918033 5.53046319177 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267759562842 0.284621296913 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229508196721 0.211203875043 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147540983607 0.133321485273 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0546448087432 0.0843313296314 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44712363932 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622163163488 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.2396866833 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 12.2 16.4300151701 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2523548674 44.7399317507 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6 90.9928171075 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 16.4300151701 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.266666666667 0.613754768223 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 35.1508196721 37.5504026743 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.20895522388 1.13073093955 107% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330429252842 0.331212695627 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0777828217938 0.0927372745006 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0769151138071 0.0736520305886 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.55314739954 0.579516596996 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.261691399778 0.180689518051 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106351112037 0.122183219658 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934767141591 0.0765303033291 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.169850797993 0.211926503985 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102270826495 0.0737400523855 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192824132026 0.203819188451 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965678333227 0.067151250289 144% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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