In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break worldrecords. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous.
What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?
In bygone days sport winners achieved their aims and goals just to be the first, or for being in record books. Nowadays the first places is motivated by prizes and honorariums. In this essay I am going to cover the issues how above mentioned things affect to young generations.
To begin with, as athletes’ motivation has changed, it brings some negative effects to youth. Most of football, basketball or other group players are estimated millions of dollars and this make them to feel themselves like a star. It gives them luxurious life and most of them forget their humanism and kindness. Mostly of them are funs of Youngers and certainly that Youngers couldn’t be kind and clever person after all.
Besides it, sportsmen lose their ability working in group. Each of them are trying to show their play in their own and eventually the team lose the game. This also affect to young generation. They should be able to work in group and to win as a team, not as apart leader.
Of course, I understand that there are such a big number of problems concerning the finance, and getting money and this influenced to everyone, also to sportsmen. If in the past sportsmen tried to achieve their goals, just because for reputation, now mostly they reached the goals because of prizes and to cover their finance needs. But in my opinion all of us, sportsmen, accountants, pop stars, regardless who we are, must be a human and shouldn’t forget human qualities.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'after all', 'of course', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22866894198 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.160409556314 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0580204778157 0.0946595960268 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037542662116 0.0501214627716 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0784982935154 0.0437548338989 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112627986348 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0341296928328 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66374793027 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0477815699659 0.0326793684256 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0682593856655 0.0861772015684 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00682593856655 0.021408717616 32% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00682593856655 0.011925033212 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1485.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89285714286 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321428571429 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218253968254 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154761904762 0.203846283523 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115079365079 0.137316102897 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66374793027 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 68.2208494096 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4923130412 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 39.8253968254 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.35802469136 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419936316867 0.332605444948 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0930280339224 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0685679389209 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53908483818 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121893850773 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170019763679 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905972761604 0.0742795772207 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255484684654 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0903944266054 0.0638462369009 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298194654027 0.228012699653 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840466142641 0.058150111329 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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