On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you in regard of loss of my favorite necklace.
I was on long vacation for (10 days) in one of the 5 stars hotel. Each evening hotel authorities hold some interesting parties, quizzes and entertain the people. On the last day they hold a wonderful party with live music. That evening I was worn my valuable necklace. After the party I remember that I took off the necklace and as I prepared to come back, I put it to my pocket for valuable things. When I returned home and open my pocket the necklace wasn’t there. I was upset with this loss, it had a sensible value for me.
As I was insured by your company I would like to ask you to cover the cost of the lost. The necklace was gold with some diamonds. I can send you all related details and also the passport of the product if it is needed.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Rahimova Mehriban
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ss, it had a sensible value for me. As I was insured by your company I would l...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Rahimova Mehriban
^^^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Rahimova Mehriban
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21608040201 0.220444632235 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.160804020101 0.167888034529 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0502512562814 0.0606518309736 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0251256281407 0.0506257000042 50% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.140703517588 0.118615021944 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120603015075 0.107062808482 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0502512562814 0.041066498444 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42169327032 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251256281407 0.0385302599488 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00502512562814 0.00132118243153 380% => OK
Determiners: 0.0904522613065 0.0714148451538 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0100502512563 0.0191574576366 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00502512562814 0.00930345855455 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 948.0 1141.60824742 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.134020619 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35593220339 5.53046319177 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.25988700565 0.284621296913 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220338983051 0.211203875043 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141242937853 0.133321485273 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0508474576271 0.0843313296314 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42169327032 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622163163488 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.0951280618 62.8969750728 97% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 12.6428571429 16.4300151701 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5789220017 44.7399317507 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7142857143 90.9928171075 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6428571429 16.4300151701 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.613754768223 47% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 34.6767554479 37.5504026743 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.18461538462 1.13073093955 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316068701324 0.331212695627 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0880491529715 0.0927372745006 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0752607838866 0.0736520305886 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58469563588 0.579516596996 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.255305797582 0.180689518051 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108376595221 0.122183219658 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964048147376 0.0765303033291 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.169697138183 0.211926503985 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0983470113034 0.0737400523855 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18939164267 0.203819188451 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891216128242 0.067151250289 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.