The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The figure demonstrates the difference in proportion of households that are owned and the ones that are rented in two countries of United Kingdom, namely, England and Wales within the years 1918 and 2011.
It is overt in the picture that people reduced renting accommodation and augmented the ownership of households during the time period on study. Specifically, the percentage of households that are owned increased from around 22 % to almost 70 % till 2001. It seems the owned accommodations decreased from the start of 21st century till the next decade to about 65 %. However, trend to rent accommodations saw a steep decrease of about 45 % during the 20th century and increased to almost 38 % in the decade from 2001 to 2011.
In an interesting note, the percentage of households that are rented and owned was equal to 50 % in 1971. Moreover, looking at the trend in the decade after 21st century, as the trend to own a house decreased, the proportion of housing that are rented increased.
To sum up, it can be inferred from the diagram that as people started to own houses, idea to rent the accommodation has reduced throughout the century.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90206185567 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86170840583 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.2147300965 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221498795985 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102602442409 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046874858346 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136231148083 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434811015779 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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