The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The figure demonstrates the difference in the proportion of households that are owned and the ones rented in two countries of the United Kingdom, namely, England and Wales between the years 1918 and 2011.
It is overt in the picture that people reduced renting accommodation and augmented the ownership of households during the period on the study. Specifically, the percentage of households that are owned increased from around 22 % to almost 70 % till 2001. It seems the owned accommodations decreased from the start of the 21st century till the next decade to about 65 %. However, the trend to rent accommodations saw a steep decrease of about 45 % during the 20th century and increased to almost 38 % in the decade from 2001 to 2011.
On an interesting note, the percentage of households that are rented and owned was equal to 50 % in 1971. Moreover, looking at the trend in the decade after the 21st century, as the proclivity to own a house decreased, the proportion of rented housing increased.
Summing up, it can be inferred from the diagram, as people started to own houses, the idea to rent accommodation has reduced throughout the century.

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Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95336787565 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90453130704 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538860103627 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.9230395498 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236001212968 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107999546643 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564899316635 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146468501073 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057299214782 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95336787565 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90453130704 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538860103627 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.9230395498 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236001212968 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107999546643 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564899316635 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146468501073 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057299214782 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.