The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart compares the number of British graduate and postgraduate students who did not have a full-time job in terms of what they did in 2008.

Overall, there are more graduate students than postgraduates. Most of the graduates and postgraduates went to further study, while the second-largest category was part-time work. In addition, fewest students tended to do voluntary work.

As the graph shows, 29,665 graduate students went to further study, followed by part-time work, standing at 17,735 students. Similar to part-time work, the figure for unemployment graduates is also high, at 16,235 students. Only 3,500 graduate students did voluntary work in 2008.

On the other hand, although less in number, pursuing further study also ranked top on the destinations of the UK postgraduates at 2,725. A slightly smaller number of postgraduates did part-time jobs, at 2,535. The figure for unemployed postgraduate students was 1,625, while fewest students did voluntary work, at 345. Generally, the relative ranking of different types of destinations was the same in both graduates and postgraduates.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the fewest'.
Suggestion: , the fewest
...category was part-time work. In addition, fewest students tended to do voluntary work. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
...in 2008. On the other hand, although less in number, pursuing further study also ranked top...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the fewest'.
Suggestion: while the fewest
...ployed postgraduate students was 1,625, while fewest students did voluntary work, at 345. Ge...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51461988304 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05717660349 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.252107367 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7272727273 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283523503637 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124958381518 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880340464786 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20586425032 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788958758197 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 8.71597938144 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the fewest'.
Suggestion: , the fewest
...category was part-time work. In addition, fewest students tended to do voluntary work. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
...in 2008. On the other hand, although less in number, pursuing further study also ranked top...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the fewest'.
Suggestion: while the fewest
...ployed postgraduate students was 1,625, while fewest students did voluntary work, at 345. Ge...
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51461988304 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05717660349 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.252107367 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7272727273 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283523503637 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124958381518 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880340464786 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20586425032 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788958758197 0.0580467560999 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 8.71597938144 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.