The company you’re working offers funds and required things to the groups of local community every year. Write a letter to the director of your company to recommend a group in your local community which deserves help.
In your letter, you should:
describle what the group is
say how your company funds can help them
explain why helping them is a good idea.
Dear Director,
I am writing to you, to request an assistant from the company regarding the funds that you offer each year during Christmas, for the local community.
My friends and I, 2 years ago we founded a small committee to aid poor local people, friends and some family members. We collect each month foods, clothes and medicines from many helpful citizens. Addition to this, we do small events to make money, in order to do some activities for kids, to make them feel that they aren’t alone in this world.
However, we request from your company if it is possible, a small amount of these funds; to help those people during this holy month (Christmas). Since, until today we couldn’t find the exact number of donors to reach our target and fulfil the happiness of those people.
Moreover, by the assistant of your company, this will impact positively on its reputation. Where people will know the company more and encourage them to purchase the products that it sells and raise its profit.
I would like to take our request into consideration, I appreciate your help if it is done.
Best Regards
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53105709141 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3395795917 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187564278226 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668834204983 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682473052934 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107286580971 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654090307408 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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