During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurant.
write a letter to this businessman. in your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for this job
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter for a possible employment opportunity at one of your many franchises of the Olive Garden Restaurants. I would like to kindly remind you regarding our flight travel together from New York to Florida on 15th March. During our interesting conversation, you advised me to write to you regarding this position at your restaurant.
Let me explain in detail, I have been a trained chef in Italian and other European cuisines making me an ideal fit for your chain of Italian restaurants. From what I understand you are always on a lookout for assistant chefs at these places. Although I have been working as the head chef at my current workplace, I would be more than excited to grab this opportunity to work at a reputed gourmet restaurant particularly serving Italian cuisines like yours.
To outline a brief description of my work experience, I have been working at small and large food joints for four years now not only in New York but also in Boston. Moreover, my skills with traditional Italian delicacies and expertise in preparing the hand-made pasta makes me a perfect addition to the team of professional chefs for your restaurant business.
For further communications kindly contact me on details mentioned in the resume attached with this letter.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Samantha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[3]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to regard'.
Suggestion: to regard
...ants. I would like to kindly remind you regarding our flight travel together from New Yor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, regarding, so, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08849557522 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94780607481 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615044247788 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0365983709 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168040843254 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816998480231 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746496884662 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111785857567 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862838060006 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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