During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
write a letter to this businessman, In your letter
- remind him when and where you met.
- tell him what kind of job you are interested in
- say why you think would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Prabh, I was your fellow passenger sitting next to you in the flight A28 Indigo Airlines, which we boarded from Delhi to Australia on 1st September. I wish these details will help you to remember me. I am writing this letter with regards to the job offer in your restaurant you had mentioned during our conversation.
Firstly, I am thankful to you for providing me with this opportunity. As you might already know, I am pursuing masters of Hotel Management from the Orchid University. Only one month's training is left for the completion of my studies, after that, I will require a job. Owing to my field of education, I consider myself suitable for the post of the hotel manager. The reason for this is I have learned an adequate managerial skills such as managing staff, accounting data, organizing bookings and dealing with customers, as part of my curriculum which makes me suitable for this job. Moreover, during my current six months of training in the hotel Taj, I have also gained experience in dealing with foreign clients and managing grand parties.
I hope to be part of your organization which you have built with great hardwork and zeal. If you have further queries or need further information, please contact me at the email address or phone number provided on my Curriculum Vitae.
I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Prabh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, My name is Prabh, I was your fell...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 424, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...s I have learned an adequate managerial skills such as managing staff, accounting data...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92887029289 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68853115779 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619246861925 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3223994032 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6153846154 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181857598506 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727955846596 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482947248934 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123600741372 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049293199972 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.