During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter,
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. John,
It was a pleasure meeting you and having a talk with you. I am writing to express my interest in working at one of your restaurants in Bangalore.
I hope you remember our discussion during the plane journey on last Tuesday, when we shared the same flight from Delhi to Bangalore, regarding your restaurants in various cities across the country.
Since I am studying for my Master's degree in Bangalore, due to the scarcity of money, I could not arrange my tuition fees. Thus, I would like to apply for the position of a chef in your restaurant, located in Bangalore, for the night shift. Needless to say, it would be beneficial to cope with my financial crisis.
Moreover, of particular relevance is the fact that I possess an advanced level certificate, for my skills in preparing Italian cuisine, from International Cookery School. Thus, it would provide gratification if I could use my cooking skills to earn my livelihood and pay for my studies. In addition to this, I would be grateful to work with such a recognized brand.
Kindly consider my application. Also, I have attached my curriculum vitae as well as a copy of the certificate with this letter.
Yours sincerely,
Jaskaran Kaur
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90384615385 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8830765126 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649038461538 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2992835276 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128718689946 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496995203937 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611188124442 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930345100713 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893851582545 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.