Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV.
Why is this happening?
Do you think it's a good idea to copy celebrities?
Nowadays, in the digital era, people get influenced by their role models, popular actors, or sportsmen in particular, through platforms such as TV and magazines. In this essay, I shall examine the psychological studies to discuss the factors responsible for this followed by the positive as well as negative effects of copying the celebrities.
To begin with, common people's lives have been significantly affected by the lifestyle of famous actors, fashion models, and sportsmen. This is because the youngsters, as well as adults, want to be perceived as updated with the latest trends. To exemplify, a study by the human psychology institute shows that about 80 percent of individuals are afraid to be left out by their peers because of their lack in fashion sense. Moreover, the television personalities set universal trends that entice youth, and thus, they try to copy them.
From my perspective, following the positive actions of the celebrities foster their followers to involve in activities that are beneficial for society. For instance, many cricketers endorse healthy products and lifestyles, that inspire the young generation to develop their physical strength, thus making them less obese. Another example would be the actors voicing their opinions on social matters such as discrimination based on caste and color, which encourage their audience to stand against such inequity. However, in some cases, in an attempt to imitate the extravagance way of living, one might go in debt. Therefore, it could also be disadvantageous.
To conclude, the yearning of being accepted and recognized by their peers and to show off, people try to assimilate their role models. Although to mimic their affluent lifestyle could have detrimental effects, it has certain advantages that change the narrow mentality of the public and helps them evolve.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in particular, such as, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3883161512 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90080369635 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652920962199 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7398343966 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106880603972 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350473773159 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352943241865 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640230872585 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374206428116 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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