A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter,
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir,
I am writing in regard to your request for the feedback concerning the investment of your company in town activities.
To begin with, the residents of our area are overwhelmed with your decision to spend money on the welfare or entertainment of our society. Undoubtedly, sponsorship for the sports team would not only be advantageous for the youth of our area as it would encourage youngsters and provide them a chance to represent our area at an advanced level but also, your company would be represented in district and state-level championship.
On the other hand, open-air concerts would be beneficial for people of all ages because everybody would get entertained. Also, outsiders would get attracted and would join the events, thus, benefiting your company by giving it recognition in a wider audience.
From my perspective, investing your money in the children's sports team would be far useful for the reason that talented children would be given the opportunity and this would foster their peers as well.
I hope you will take my opinion into consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jaskaran Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in regard to your request f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus, well, in regard to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25414364641 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97894076687 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8896196788 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245127060505 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102614674511 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662616488258 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133604812501 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765325671073 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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