The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is expected that by the 21st century 29 million vehicles will be there on British roads where the initial car was introduced in the year 1888. So, it is believed that to reduce the number of cars and usage of different mode of transport should be used along with the implementation of international regulations. In my opinion, I completely agree that different modes, controlled ownership and laws will minimize the number of cars on road.
The first benefit of controlling car ownership by using public transport is that it will be economical for the commuters. People will spend almost half of the money by travelling in public transport as compared to cars which become expensive due to higher cost of fuel. This, in turn, will allow them to allocate the saved money for other productive purposes.
Another reason for limiting the number of cars on the road is to avoid traffic jams. During peak hours, there is a lot of traffic on roads because all people use personal cars for commuting. This traffic, in turn, creates air-pollution and noise-pollution which effect the health of people emmensly. It creates breathing issues and can lead to hazardous lung diseases as well.
Finally, controlled ownership of cars will lead to less number of road accidents and hence giving a sense of satisfaction and security among the family members.
In conclusion, the purchase of new cars should be discouraged by motivating people to travel by other means of transport and by implementing international rules and regulations.
Comments
There is no gainsaying the…
There is no gainsaying the fact is that the first automobile was found in 1888 after that the number of cars increased to about 29 million in 2000. I completely agree with the given statement. My views related to given statement would be hashed out in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are several reasons which justify to my opinion. First of all, traffic problems. To elaborate it, the problem of traffic is increasing day by day people prefer to use their own vehicles as compared to public transport. It can be lead the issue of accident. By enacting the laws to control ownership and use helps to reduce this snag
Secondly , rising the automobile vehicles on roads create the problem of pollution. To explain it, the motercars release harmful gases which mixed in air and pollute it which produce numbers of diseases such as heart disease, breathing problem and so on. So, people should encouraged to use other modes of transportation such as bicycle in order to mitigate this issue.
To conclude, having mulled over the aforementioned information it is clear that although cars is most useful means of transportation but it creates number of harmful effects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07509881423 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89130907578 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.5895134804 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338372458184 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124853569869 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106512601476 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180664724101 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113169253282 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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