A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday Write a letter to your friend In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Essay topics:

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties

Dear John,

Hope you’re doing well these days, and everything is going smoothly with you. I am writing to ask for a favor, as you are aware that next week I am traveling overseas, to visit my parents and won’t be back until the next month. Therefore, I would like from your side, to look over my house and my pet, I will explain what I want you to take care over.

Of course, you know my puppy, I want from you to take care of it, you can keep it at home or take it at your house. It’s so friendly and calm, you need to feed it 3 times per day from its own food, give it a walk daily at night or afternoon. Its shower is once per week, you can find all its stuff at the garage in the white closet with a tag name on it.
Moreover, as you know that this season, I planted some vegetables, I need you to check them daily and if there’s some needed to be collect, please do it and take them to your parents. Even, water the plants 3 times a week, if the weather is hot, water them each day during the night.

Thank you for your time and appreciate your help during this period, any extra payments for the pet, please keep the receipt with you and I’ll settle them all when I am back.

Your Best Friend,

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: ARRIVE_NNP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arrive in' or 'arrive at'?
Suggestion: arrive in; arrive at
...he households the cleaning company will arrive Friday afternoon around 2:30 pm, where ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'll' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...your help a lot, will see you when I’ll came back maybe we’ll have a drink at our ho...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, regarding, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37362637363 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12812631858 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0658259527 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3636363636 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138137835966 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479822279945 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523263540573 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788057649591 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362989988965 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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