A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Give contact details for when you are away
• Give instructions about how to care for your pet
• Describe other household duties
Dear Evan,
I’m just writing to thank you for agreeing to house sit for me while I’m away next week.
I’ll be staying at the Intercontinental Hotel in Manhattan. To reach me you just need to call reception and they will redirect the call to my room. If it’s urgent, please don’t hesitate to call me on my mobile phone. I’ve written all the contact details on a sticky note that I left on the fridge.
My dog needs to be fed twice daily, so each morning and evening put two teacups of dog biscuits in his dish. You will find these in the kitchen pantry. Also check throughout the day that he has fresh water in his bowl to make sure he stays hydrated.
I’d also like you to water my plants. The indoor ones located in the lounge room only need to be watered once every few days but the ones on the balcony require water once a day unless it’s been raining. For security purposes, please keep the outside lights on at night.
Keep in touch
Suri
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| 2018-11-21 | Suri Nguyen | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... will find these in the kitchen pantry. Also check throughout the day that he has fr...
^^^^
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'checks'.
Suggestion: checks
... find these in the kitchen pantry. Also check throughout the day that he has fresh wa...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32880512996 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8667253521 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0843381220165 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336402895759 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046106862741 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672814558869 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632210978297 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.