Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
While some men and women choose to live in a house, others prefer to stay in an apartment. Even though living in a house is less safe than staying in an apartment, the benefit of having privacy far outweighs the drawback.
The main disadvantage is that houses are unsafe. That is to say, while most of apartments have security and cameras to keep everybody safe, houses do not provide any protection’s services. Some houses are also not maintained well; therefore, their fire alarms and smoke alarms do not work in some cases. For example, last year in Toronto, there was a fire from a single house killed 4 international students who rented the rooms there. The main reason was that fire alarm was too old to active and the owner did not fix the alarm properly. However, this drawback can be prevented by installing more cameras around houses and improving the maintenance of houses
On the other hand, the main advantage is that living in a house is more private than living in an apartment. Apartments always have their own rules and their residents have to follow the rules whether they want or not. In contract, houses, which belong to a landlord, do not have any restricted rules and anyone living there can do what ever they like. For instance, a survey conducted in 2018 showed that more than 90% of the condos in Toronto area do not allow their residents do BBQs or invite their friends to stay with them from 1:00 AM to 7:00 AM. This privacy problem is very important in choosing a place to live and eclipses any fears about unsafe properties.
In conclusion, the freedom of living in a house far outweighs the supposed disadvantage of an unsafe house.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the apartments') or simply say ''most apartments''.
Suggestion: most of the apartments; most apartments
...ouses are unsafe. That is to say, while most of apartments have security and cameras to keep every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69047619048 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56060105701 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3202439487 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375686945969 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137007146639 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138105122536 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254787877367 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10220503054 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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