Write a letter to your friend who is interested in learning how to drive. In your
Letter
•Say why a driving license is advantageous
•Recommend a driving school
•Give any extra guidance /tips
Hi Emma
I thought I’d write to you and try to convince you to finally get your driving licence and
tell you about a great instructor I know.
If you got your licence you could easily pick your kids up from school every day and
they wouldn’t have to wait for the bus. It would also give you lots more independence
and you could go anywhere you liked when the children are busy at school.
I’ve found the perfect driving school for you. She’s a young lady called Chloe and she’s
good friends with my wife. As you know, my wife was struggling to pass her test for
years and it only took a few lessons with Chloe to give her lots of confidence and she
passed with flying colours.
The best tip I can give you is to find a place where there are no cars and just practice
there. I know that you get really nervous in traffic and are afraid of having an accident,
so all you need is a little time to get used to driving without any of those distractions.
Anyway, good luck with the lessons.
Kind regards
Clair
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 29, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...g colours. The best tip I can give you is to find a place where there are no cars...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4381443299 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27197994457 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9570580754 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123369611973 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549046342517 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498017974944 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450215690425 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466149970241 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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