Write a letter to your friend who is interested in learning how to drive. In your
Letter
•Say why a driving license is advantageous
•Recommend a driving school
•Give any extra guidance /tips
Dear Evan,
I’m just writing to let you know about driving in Canada since I heard that you want to join a driving school.
The first advantage of the driver license is that it can replace your passport. After you get the license, you don’t need to go everywhere with your passport and to worry about losing that. And of course, the main reason of getting a license is that you can have your own car. It’ll save your travelling time and you’ll have more time to do something else.
I studied how to drive at Sunlife driving school which is located near North York center. This school provides Vietnamese teachers. I know your English is very good, but I think studying in the first language is always better. You should join Mr. Nam’s class. He’s my old teacher and he’s extremely helpful. His driving skill is absolutely great.
I’d recommend you that don’t be so stress. I was so exciting when I started my driving class, but I hit the curb several times because I couldn’t control the pressure that I put on the press at the first time. Then I was so nervous whenever I started the car’s engine. Because of that, I failed my first driving test.
Good luck and see you soon.
Suri
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, i think, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74193548387 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49738974777 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626728110599 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3505354714 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3125 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5625 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182228210774 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677051482819 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714328187754 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107292579555 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732591896026 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.