Some people think that all university students should study what ever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that students should choose their field of study, while others say that they should only consider the subjects such as science and technology, which are helpful in their future careers. Although studying science and technology ensures them high salary jobs in future, I believe that they cannot succeed if they do not pursue their dreams.
On one hand, pupils should choose what they want to study because of their success. If they did not follow their passions, they could not put a hundred percent of their energies on studying. Moreover, any type of career can bring students a better future whenever they focus on doing that. For example, Miss Lee, who is a famous singer and one of the richest woman in Korea, said that her mother did not expect her to earn enough money for her family expenses because she only loved the music class at school. Therefore, I totally agree with this because so many people in the world achieve their ambitions when they listen to their dreams.
On the other hand, students should focus on studying science and technology because they can easily find high income job offers in this field. Technology has been developing strongly and everybody has to agree that this is the time of science and technology. Technological companies are racing to be the first runner in this field. Therefore, technologists are always offered a higher salary than others. For example, a survey was conducted at Seneca College in Toronto showed that 70% of international students want to learn computer science or civil engineering in order to get valuable jobs after graduation. However, I disagree with this because not everybody has abilities to achieve in this field.
In conclusion, even though working in science and technology offers people a high quality life, I believe that students can only be successful when they follow their dream.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...echnology ensures them high salary jobs in future, I believe that they cannot succeed if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0127388535 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44277273325 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8742660052 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269185448689 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096935559172 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814235395779 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185453742526 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721280757359 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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