A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, 1. give contact details for when you are away 2. give instructions about how to care for your pet3. describe other household dutie

Essay topics:

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

1. give contact details for when you are away

2. give instructions about how to care for your pet

3. describe other household duties.

Dear Vinya,

I hope you are doing well. Thank you for agreeing to look after my house and to pet my dog while I am on vacation. It is a great relief for me and I can enjoy my vacation without being concerned about the security of the house.

As you know, I am travelling to Thailand coming week and I have enabled ISD facility for my mobile service. Hence, you can reach me on the same number anytime in case if emergency. Feel free to send me regular updates via email and I will try to check them every night before I sleep.

Dog needs to be fed three times a day and you will find the dog food next to the fridge. Fill the water bowl frequently and he will drink when he feels thirsty. Also, please take him for a 15 minutes walk twice a day.

With regards to household tasks, you will need to keep the garbage binn for collection on Tuesday evening and remember to water the plants daily.

I appreciate your kind help and looking forward to meet you after my vacation.

Best Regards,

Ragav

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 19, column 49, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...iate your kind help and looking forward to meet you after my vacation. Best Regard...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, well, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37696335079 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16987758638 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670157068063 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1359957403 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206044988933 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685117897976 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648983063009 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117169132474 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612610480399 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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