People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter…
Describe the problem
Explain how they are affecting people.
Say what company should do to help.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Raghav and I am the resident of crown colony community. I am writing this letter to complain about the frequent connectivity issues with the internet.
Recently we are facing frequent breakdown of internet services. Initially, I thought it was something to do with our individual house but later on I discovered that the issue is common across our community. This is a known issue and we have reported to service desk multiple times during last 2 weeks. The problem still exists and it is causing lot of issues.
Internet speed has dropped less than 10Mbps and it is causing issues to load the live streaming services like Netfleix, Hulu etc. Furthermore, it has made terrific impact on our children's educational assignments because of bad internet connectivity.
I strongly demand a immediate attention to resolve the issue and to maintain a steady internet service hereafter. Also, I request a detailed root cause analysis report and further action plan to avoid such issues.
Looking forward for a better service.
Best Regards
Raghav
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...et connectivity. I strongly demand a immediate attention to resolve the issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40410958904 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8636117223 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719178082192 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1791608297 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815173554243 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291060635963 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414438316746 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043127359569 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384927411047 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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