People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter…
Describe the problem
Explain how they are affecting people.
Say what company should do to help.
Dear sir,
I would like to bring to your notice the issues related to the internet connection faced by people in Zone 4. One of them is that, the online connection has fluctuations, which means it stops any time during the middle of the day. Due to this connectivity problem, many of us are unable to finish our routine work with ease. There is a public park which operates online has been kept close for last two days, as the connection goes off suddenly and so it worries the operators of the park. Many of us feel that the recent rains might have created the connection problems, hence it would be great if you can assign a technician to survey the area and find the real cause of the issue.
The other problem is that, on the weekends the connectivity issues starts during the night. During weekends as part of a social gesture, the social service group in our area prefer projecting motivational movies for children, but because of the irregularity in the connection they are not able do achieve. Finally, I urge you to consider this problem as critical and instruct someone to take complete charge of the aggravated situation and solve this problem for the betterment of our area.
Yours truly,
Leena
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69953051643 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59437996051 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7666655981 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11425694548 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516318054081 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301167588232 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887330827125 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145878009837 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.