You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abou

Essay topics:

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.

Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

Dear Sir,

My name is Raghav and I travelled on MA215 airline from Bangalore to Abu dabi on 9/7/2019. I writing this letter to compain about my missing suitcase from the check-in luggage.

I am a frecquent traveller on MA airlines and I have always enjoyed your service. However, my experience with the last travel was overwhelming bacause of the missing suitcase. I generally check in my suitase before the travel and collect it after my journey which is more convenieant. Unfortunately, I couldn't locate my suitacse this time in the luggage belt and I reported immideately to lugague department.

It is a brown color suitcase with hard case and has a BFC logo with a white tape attached to its handle for easy identification. Forthermore, the suitcase contains some vauable items like camera, laptop and new clothes I purchased recently. Overall worth of the suitcase would be around 2000 USD.

Its been more than a week and I havn't herd anything from the luggage department yet. I would request you to take a immediate action to locate my suitacase and hand it over to my home address as soon as possible. Also, I expect you to take necessary measures to avoid such mistake in future.

Looking for a speedy response.

Regards

Raghav

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...from Bangalore to Abu dabi on 9/7/2019. I writing this letter to compain about my...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...h is more convenieant. Unfortunately, I couldnt locate my suitacse this time in the lug...
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Line 15, column 114, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rtment yet. I would request you to take a immediate action to locate my suitacase...
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Line 15, column 281, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ecessary measures to avoid such mistake in future. Looking for a speedy response. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95774647887 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79938214058 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652582159624 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.971539985 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2307692308 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164198022161 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050350312791 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040867420037 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745457828094 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395413334622 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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