You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do abou

Essay topics:

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.

Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.

I am writing today to intimate you regarding the suitcase that I had lost at the airport last week.

Let me share the details in brief with you. I was travelling back home to london from Manchester after my meeting on the last Wednesday. I had deposited my baggage during the check in but didn't receive the same at london. The suitcase contains a few clothes, toiletries and a few important notes and documents that I had taken from the meeting. These documents are of utmost importance to me and I would need them before the month end, failing which my work would be hampered. The suit case is made of black leather, bearing the initials of my name A.B. in golden letters near the number lock, on the top of the bag.

As a remedy, and as I really need the documents, I am hoping that you would be kind to inform and keep the suitcase in your supervision once you have found it. Will have it collected personally. I'm attaching a copy of the boarding pass and a picture of the bag for your ready reference. hoping for a prompt response.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours truly,

Abhishek Berry

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ited my baggage during the check in but didnt receive the same at london. The suitcas...
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Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... it. Will have it collected personally. Im attaching a copy of the boarding pass a...
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Line 9, column 288, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hoping
...re of the bag for your ready reference. hoping for a prompt response. Thank you f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, regarding, so, in brief

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57425742574 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53039555728 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2625304025 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0769230769 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206253786088 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674591806172 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595371144839 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133748734403 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297839578105 0.0580467560999 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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