When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this era of development and modernisation it is vital for every government to stay updated. this development is beneficial for the nation but, might have an adverse affect on citizens. These perplexed thoughts are what we are going to discuss.
Today, it is the need of the hour is to have the best infrastructure, strongest defence and ultra modern ways of production. Digitalisation has brought technological advancement at a vast scale. Computers, tablets, phones, cameras, sensors, integrated circuit, etc. are no longer in the luxury segment, it is now a basic amenity. To exemplify, there was a time when it took years to complete the construction of a bridge, which also involved exorbitant amount of investment. With the urbanisation, it takes lesser manpower and is time efficient.Thus, advancement is the first step towards becoming a developed nation.
A developing country had to adequately monitor the drawbacks followed with the growth. Conglomerate and big companies tend to act as a competition for the skilled labour. Machinery reduce manpower, resulting in few job opportunities. workers with old school tradition and art are also negatively impacted. For illustration, with the advance competitors like Raymond and Oswal in the textile and wool industry, it has become nearly impossible for Kashmiri handloom workers to promote their shawls, carpets and other textile goods. Leading to demotivation and breakdown.
As a conclusion, and also comprehending that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, I agree to the fact that change and development are of utmost importance. Philanthropists and researchers are investing their invaluable time and money in every field to achieve technological advancement around the globe. In my opine, growth is mandate for a country, as well as for every individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51590106007 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34673934764 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6591302243 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7222222222 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117136315772 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319564213931 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323219952656 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655192313748 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248588462233 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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