Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some experts believe that sharing and collecting personal data is a vital process for an organisation, whereas others relate it to breach of personal information. These perplexed thoughts are what we are going to discuss.
People are dubious on analysing this concept. For any conglomerate, company, office or any workplace, this acts as a source of verification and authenticity. A lot of individuals, around the world are indulged in vast varieties of mischief, it is this, what makes it of utmost importance for an employer. To exemplify, lots of terror group are working in Pakistan to infiltrate India and various other countries, by means of fake or duplicate documents. In today’s era, it is a necessity to have all possible details of an employee at your premises, for security and safety, and as per the statutory compliances of the government.
Synopsis, has revealed that a few organisation has been found guilty, by either, misusing or sharing personal details of their staff, for personal or monetary benefits. A company always comprises of a group of people, designated with their duties and responsibilities, working towards words achieving a specified goal. Generally, it is just one person in the Human Resource group, who has the access to the data of employees. In one of my personal case, my data of financials, bearing details of quotes, proposals and other offerings where leaked to a competitor, by one of the team members, resulting in loss of opportunity and bid, for business. data, whether of an individual or a company is of equal importance and thus regulation authorities should focus on safe data management.
To conclude, and comprehending the sheer need of personal bio, I would agree on the fact, being followed worldwide, that for the security of the nation, welfare and not overlooking the ease of verification for other schools, colleges, offices and government authorities, this should be deemed compulsory for any type of entrepreneur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organisation seems to be countable; consider using: 'few organisations'.
Suggestion: few organisations
...ent. Synopsis, has revealed that a few organisation has been found guilty, by either, misus...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... or monetary benefits. A company always comprises of a group of people, designated with thei...
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Line 9, column 649, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Data
...s of opportunity and bid, for business. data, whether of an individual or a company ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1547815272 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6733715147 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.076923077 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218619516657 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705649647226 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495664342842 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133703514932 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248112470243 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.