Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that students should invest their valuable time towards acquiring knowledge about futuristic subjects relating to technology and science, whereas, others believe in giving liberty to the children for opting the subject in the university. These perplexed thoughts have their own pros and cons which you are going to discuss.
First of all, we cannot deny the sheer importance of higher education. Most of the higher and secondary schools have fixed set of subjects compulsory for every child till a certain age. Colleges and universities are institutions for choosing and following a path of career building. By the time an individual reaches this age, he or she is my matured enough to take the appropriate decision of life. To exemplify, a pupil who has completed his secondary school with humanity, would preferably like to select mass communication bachelor of arts for his degree. Furthermore, science and technological developments have their own assets and liabilities. For a few people physics is the simplest subject but for some, it is rocket science.
On the contrary, we at times tend to overlook the disadvantages tagged along. A synopsis revealed, researchers and philanthropists are investing their invaluable time and money to achieve the impossible with the help of science. science and technological advancements are of utmost importance for the development of any nation. To illustrate, Elon Musk, the CEO of SpaceX is currently working on attaining the highest broadband speed with the help of over 6000 satellites. this has been possible with the dedication and research of science and scientists.
As a conclusion, and comprehending that all subjects have their own credibility, I strongly believe that parents and guardians should emphasise on the regime of the of their young ones rather than the subjects for a bright future of our kith and kin.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Science
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, whereas, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33887043189 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02107913318 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9481635642 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126437917681 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373343985202 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433732818446 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850529960885 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533500762588 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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