Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Umpteen number of people comprehend the importance of kindergarten schools, whereas, others have a contrary view point over this education system. Thus, it is imperative to discuss the advantages of initial learning.
To commence with, we cannot tend to overlook the advantages of early learning. kindergartens, play ways and other primary schools are majorly aiming at achieving essential skills like team-working ability, comprehending regime or just to make learning fun, and seldom focused towards studies. In fact, it should be compulsory for every child, which might result in an early and healthy exposure. Developing skills at a younger age give me the ability of better understanding and recalling. To exemplify, a child who reaches first class after completing his play ways and nursery will manifest signs of knowledge and information, over a child, who has just been introduced to the pattern of schools without any prior experience. thus, parents should proactively introduce their children to school at an early age.
Ultimately, therefore, in this era when researchers and philanthropists are devoting their invaluable time and money towards attaining equality for students around the world, it becomes vital for every child to prepare to survive in a competitive world and prepare accordingly. Although,a lot of people believe that parents are the first teachers but, giving ample time and attention dedicatedly at times become a task due to the busy life schedules. thus, to have an adequate methodology of learning and acquiring, the presence of these schools for the toddlers is a must.
As a conclusion, and apprehending the utmost need of primary school, these educational institutions should be mandated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51119402985 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0295750187 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1412994105 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.083333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170872318026 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579548400318 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311148289689 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907027692145 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219905501042 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.