some people believe that students work better if the teacher is strict, others think it is better for students if the teacher has a friendly approach.
discuss both views and give your opinion
people are at times confused in finalising the right approach of teachers towards children. On one side people feel the need of strictness and on the other hand, others are looking for a modest approach. These perplexed thoughts are what we are going to discuss.
In this era, of globalisation and modernisation, world had become a global platform and seeks equality. strictness is maintained to ensure that an individual comprehends and learns to adhere to elders. Sometimes, it becomes vital for a teacher to act a little harsh to control pupil and their actions. To exemplify, a child at a young age tends to learn abusive language. Parents, guardians and teachers are forced to use take strict mean to make this less repetitive. From birth till maturity, there are a hundred situations where we need to choose between being repulsive or being calm towards a child behaviour.
people are dubious, as to whether being strict is the only method or different methodologies can also be seen into. A kid might end up being in trauma. Often this activity of strictness is accompanied with physical and mental torture. I will share one of my personal experiences, my sister was not comfortable with mathematics.my father used to get hyper while teaching her, as a result she could not remember anything. The phobia of mathematics still exists in her mind. Thus, we should be very careful in choosing the right approach for upbringing.
As a conclusion, and assessing the pros and cons, I would recommend teachers to act as a friend, enabling the students to feel more comfortable and available, without having any fear in mind. A synopsis revealed that students who has been raised with love and care, tend to perform well in a competitive environment, as compare to children who have undergone a strict regime. In my opine, love and affection can you help us overcome any obstacle and therefore, strictness should be limited.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0092879257 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8702579166 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7734064371 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185927522985 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514605073778 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527055660396 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117305441924 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630441308111 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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