A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Tina,
Hope you are doing great. I am happy that you will visit my house during my holiday. My trip with friends is likely to happen in mid of August. I will be reachable in landline of my hotel, since we have poor signal over there. I have enclosed you my contact details for your reference. You can make use of it if you need it.
I am glad, because my puppy will stay with you. Please give him food at right time. He will be happy to roam around during evening. Take him for a stroll. He will be your best companion in my absence. Do not give him egg, he will not eat it. You can give him pedigree,which is stored in refrigerator.
Garbage will be collected every Friday, hence make sure that you dispose it. You will be warned by house owner who stays in basement if you miss to clean the garden, It would be great if you can take care of it. In case, if you require any help then you can reach out to Holmes who resides in my near flat. He can assist you with nearby shops if you are in need of getting any items.
Hope you will find good time in my place. Get back to me if you have any clarifications.
Regards,
Priyankaa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ll not eat it. You can give him pedigree,which is stored in refrigerator. Garbage w...
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Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'miss cleaning'.
Suggestion: miss cleaning
...ouse owner who stays in basement if you miss to clean the garden, It would be great if you ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 4.92783505155 345% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12946428571 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18419484272 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566964285714 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0105267152 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.6842105263 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7894736842 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193269843763 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683748164533 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673367836004 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125536143217 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513252364241 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.9 8.37731958763 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.79 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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