A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:Give information about the flatProvide any important in

Essay topics:

A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. 

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:

Give information about the flat

Provide any important instructions

Say what he/she should do if there are any problems

Dear John,

I am writing to thank you for looking after my apartment while I am gone for the holidays this coming weekend; I knew I could count on you for important matters.

There are some things I wanted you to know before you move here temporarily. For instance, the flat is on the 1st floor so you will not have any problems going up and down every day. Also, the apartment complex has ample parking space and you would not have to worry about parking your truck.

I have already notified the apartment union and close neighbors about your temporary stay. There have been a number of burglaries in the past month so you have to remain vigilant of trespassers. Do not forget to secure all door locking mechanisms which I installed last month.

There is a first-aid box in case of minor medical emergencies in my room. If there is a fire incident, please find two fire extinguishers in the storage room but only use them if you really believe the fire could be controlled, otherwise, save yourself first.

I hope you will enjoy your stay. Should there be an accident or emergency, notify me on my mobile number.

Regards,

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Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72413793103 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4839800733 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660098522167 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5286463327 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1818181818 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248608752859 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083110011266 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771653819306 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125195759659 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659296168296 0.0580467560999 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.