A friend you made while youe were studing abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
- say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
- explain how to apply for a job
Dear Parth,
Happy to know about you after such a long time. I got your letter last week and I am writing this latter in response to find the job in my location.
One of my friends is running a coaching class of the computer courses near to my home. He has requirement of trainer who have good knowledge about various computer languages like C, C++, Java and many others. You have to provide the coaching for whole day and surely you will get the satisfactory reward. As you completed the master degree in computer science with me, I know your are the best choise for this vacancy. Additionally, you have 2 years of experience in the same field.
The coaching class has a website - www.goodcoaching.com. You can directly apply from there in career section of the website. Also, mention my name in detail section as a reference.
Lots of love,
Kalpesh Sangani.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77742993643 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673202614379 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4018531781 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.4545454545 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252112828558 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754748322156 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671057853702 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15517552121 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802762427785 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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