A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.
Dear Susan,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to give advice asked in the previous letter about camping holiday in upcoming summer. As you never had a chance before camping and it would be very thrilling to spend these holidays by camping.
I have got a few pieces of advice for you that will surely help you and also make your journey smooth and convenient. Firstly, I would suggest some places which are worth visiting to see beauty of nature. Since, you are working on your project Science and environment so, Mandi and Khazar would be the best cities to visit which would not only assist you to complete your project work but also will be of great fun and enjoy.
The only disadvantage is that the weather is unpredictable. It usually excepted to be cold but, sometimes there are showers of rain and snow, so I would recommend that you should carry warm clothes with a raincoat and Umbrella and for further detailed information you should contact your group head.
I am thinking of accompanying you if my schedule matches with yours planned holidays and this would be one of the best memories of the life. With lots of love
Ravinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... to spend these holidays by camping. Ive got a few pieces of advice for you that...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on you should contact your group head. I am thinking of accompanying you if my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35981089984 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6790355011 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0909090909 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338897004614 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110656761891 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819005393724 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190346767826 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503446815501 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.