A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum.
Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful.
Give details of when you would be available for work.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in connection with a recent article published in the newspaper for part-time unpaid work in the museum.
I think it would be the great opportunity for me to join this museum since it would assist me in completing my college project on history and culture. Besides this, it will also provide me with the skills which would help me to secure job in the future.
I have vast knowledge to full fill the needs with this position therefore, I can work as client manager and a museum guide. I am good at computer and communication skills. Apart from this, I have worked in many arts, history and cultural events during my college.
I would be available for 4 hours a day and for particular schedule I can adjust my timings according to work timetable. I hope you will consider my application and allow me to work for your prestigious museum. For further information you can contact me through email.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Ravinder singh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, so, therefore, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77714285714 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65092359723 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617142857143 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4686198185 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288225564929 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10861041099 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789800004148 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161629540054 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911071695088 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.