In some areas in the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion about this
Recently there had been swelling crime rates at night in some areas of the U.S.A. In order to tackle this problem authorities have enforced strict laws according to which individual under-age of twenty years are not allowed to stroll outside after nine without the company of their elders. In my opinion this is justified and will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason behind enforcing these laws is safety of society from crimes that take the advantage of darkness. For example, most of times offenses like theft, assassinating, rape, and drugs takes place at mid night only. Secondly, in teenage individuals are unaware of good and bad things. For instance, certain places like pubs and clubs can be a hot spot of criminals and misleading activities thus, they can lead to wrong paths such as taking drugs, involving in sex racket and joining gangs.
Moreover, there is a surge in number of kidnapping cases around many cities of U.S.A. To illustrate, police records revel that only New York City accounts for nearly 90 percent of kidnapped cases as compared to other nations. Last but not least, it is also not piece of cake for cops to control crimes at night as they cannot always reach on the specific spot at a time and immediately catch the culprit. In other words, police is not always available everywhere and cannot reach suddenly due to which offender can flee into darker areas easily where they cannot be identified.
To conclude, although US government have come up with better laws However, it is also responsibility of citizens to adhere these rules so that crime rates could be reduced to great extent which can ensure safety and security of people living in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ving in sex racket and joining gangs Moreover there is a surge in number of kidnappin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81355932203 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40605384138 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640677966102 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 295.0 20.2975951904 1453% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1420.0 106.682146367 1331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 295.0 20.7667163134 1421% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 140.0 7.06120827912 1983% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187270477855 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187270477855 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104626991606 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053509232762 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 148.7 13.0946893788 1136% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -227.95 50.2224549098 -454% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 118.3 11.3001002004 1047% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.34 8.58950901804 260% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 120.0 10.1190380762 1186% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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