You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect Write a letter to the editor of the magazine In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is impor

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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in connection to some false information published about my home town recently in your newspaper ‘The Hindustan times’.

I am a frequent reader of your esteemed newspaper and read every new thoroughly. I was glad when I came across reading the news of my town Ferozepur However, I felt unhappy when I found some statics and data printed incorrectly. According to the article the temperature of my city was shown near about 49 degree Celsius in the summer but it always remains below 42 degree Celsius.

Moreover, this piece of news reveals only few places of tourist attractions, which is false. In fact, there are numerous places to visit such as Saragarhi Gurudwara, Hussaniwala Border, Fun island, Delhi gate, museum and many more. It is imperative to portray the true picture of the city as false information can adversely affect tourist industry, business, and investors. Moreover, it can negatively affect the reputation of our home town. I am humbly requesting you to edit and correct the news published with the footnote stating that the given information was false.

I am looking forward to a quick resolution to this significant matter.

Yours faithfully

Ravinder Singh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t always remains below 42 degree Celsius Moreover this piece of news reveals only...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ays remains below 42 degree Celsius Moreover this piece of news reveals only few pla...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01990049751 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6969763337 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 201.0 16.3608247423 1229% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1009.0 76.5299724578 1318% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 201.0 16.8248392259 1195% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 54.0 4.34317383033 1243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188329104464 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188329104464 0.0766984524023 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103400137108 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822743226645 0.0580467560999 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 102.7 8.37731958763 1226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -132.54 70.7449484536 -187% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 81.7 7.45979381443 1095% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.32 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.53 7.59969072165 231% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 8.62886597938 637% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 82.4 8.54432989691 964% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 82.0 8.15463917526 1006% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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