You are looking for a part time job. write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:Introduce your self.explain what sort of job you would like. say what experience and skills you have.
I am writing in connection with part-time job article displayed in yesterday newspaper. I am international student from India and currently studying for a Master’s in Oxford university Melbourne.
From the jobs enlisted by you I am perfect for the accountant manager as I have done my graduation in account management and further pursuing master’s for it. I can work on weekdays for 4 hours from 12 pm to 6 pm which would be the best time after my college is over.
I have all the required skills to fit for this job. I am good typist and computer literate. Moreover, having communication skills in all three most common languages French, Punjabi, English. In addition, to this I have fulltime experience of one year from overseas in this field and other details are listed in my resume attached with this letter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you,
Your faithfully,
Ravinder
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he required skills to fit for this job. I am good typist and computer literate. M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94805194805 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88852306991 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4342709885 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223403603524 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876411710304 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652415979544 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123335795838 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019238461481 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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