he system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
– Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice regarding the irregularity in the rubbish collection our area.
The truck for garbage collection is not visiting our locality on regular basis due to which it is piling up on the streets.The rubbish is posing a serious health hazard to people living in our area especially to the kids and teenagers going to school, and office workers going or returning from work .It is also one of the primary reasons for traffic congestion in our area and sometimes resulting in minor traffic accidents. I would request you look into the schedule of thrash collection in our area, and moreover, schedule the pick up of rubbish during the early morning hours to avoid traffic jam. Also, please arrange for spraying of insecticide after garbage collection on regular basis to avoid mosquito's. To reduce environmental pollution a separate bins to dump items that can be recycled is required. Please create awareness among the people to dump the garbage in designated bins.
I hope you will consider the points mentioned in the letter and take appropriate action to improve the garbage collection system in our locality.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.035 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69127757766 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.691468457 44.8134815571 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.875 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311963850398 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12217368642 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820603198199 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221815345048 0.12726935374 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712998212646 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.