Essay topics:
Pharmaceutical Industry
The speaker was discussing pharmaceutical industry. Firstly, he mentioned that it took about 15 years to research and 10 years to launch the product in market. He then talked about the challenges that affect pharmaceutical industry like high capital investments, product recalls. In addition, he provided the reasons for pharmaceutical products being very expensive. Finally, he suggested that pharmaceutical industry should be well supported by government and insurance companies.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he challenges that affect pharmaceutical industry like high capital investments, ...
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Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... provided the reasons for pharmaceutical products being very expensive. Finally, ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 31.9359605911 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 419.0 1207.87684729 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 68.0 242.827586207 28% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16176470588 5.00649968141 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.87162171103 3.92707691288 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78701455486 2.71678728327 139% => OK
Unique words: 51.0 139.433497537 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.580463131201 129% => OK
syllable_count: 120.6 379.143842365 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8023254766 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331093511659 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17947259516 0.0925447433944 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106489132707 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331093511659 0.151781067708 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.86 11.5310837438 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 55.0591133005 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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