You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest to pursue a short-term opportunity at the head office in Bulgaria for six months.
I came to know about this position from the weekly internal job posting email. I am really interested to work at the head office in Bulgaria to initiate a new project that involves the latest technology on which I got trained recently. This visit will also provide an opportunity for me to work with people directly involved in the project and enrich my skills and experience. I will utilize the knowledge gained from the project for the expanding the business of the company.
I will also ensure that I will transition all of my tasks to another resource, so he can efficiently take over my activities which I am currently handling to ensure the business here is not affected. Moreover, I will also offer my help to the associate when required.
I would like your help in arranging the backup resource for me and also helping me with travel arrangements to Bulgaria. It will be helpful if you can get me in touch with someone who is already stationed there to guide me.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
John Davis
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the weekly internal job posting email. I am really interested to work at head of...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'involves the latest'.
Suggestion: involves the latest
...Bulgaria to initiate a new project that involves latest technology on which I got trained recen...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople directly in involved in the project and enrich my skills and experience. I w...
^^
Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... expanding the business of the company. I will also ensure that I will transitio...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...d there to guide me. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Joh...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76442307692 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62247606896 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1444152851 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213208381775 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759266068848 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699864428375 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111600630502 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924853574297 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.