You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months.
• say how your work could be done while you are away. Remotely
• ask for his/her help in arranging it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter convey my desire to work at least six months based in our company’s head office Canada; therefore, I need your help with the necessary approval and arrangement.
As we discussed yesterday that my application for Canadian immigration has recently been approved; therefore, I would like to move to Canada in our head office for a couple of months. This short transfer would help me to know about local culture, schooling facilities for kids, medical coverage, and the cost of living out there to decide my next course of action.
Since we have 40% of the workforce who are working from homes, hence I will opt for the remote work option to complete my assigned tasks while staying away from my desk as there is no much difference in time zone between the USA and Canada. Also, I had a conversation with Tony about my absence, and she will handle my office’s landline to respond to any query during my stay in Canada.
Lastly, I would like to request you to please get formal approval from the general manager about my internal transfer, and ask the administration office to arrange my accommodation near to the Alberta office’s premises, so I could visit on and off to attend an important conference call.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing a letter convey my desire t...
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Line 13, column 182, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e staying away from my desk as there is no much difference in time zone between th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89956331878 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77167045134 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659388646288 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0600218953 44.8134815571 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.285714286 76.5299724578 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.7142857143 16.8248392259 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266853499461 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102191259553 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823299445716 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141468590698 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754009008739 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 8.37731958763 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.