IELTS General Training - Writing Task 1Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A)Introduce yourself,B)Explain what the problem is,C)Suggest solutions

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Zara residing in the 25th street of Westin Town for the past 4 years. I am writing to express my concern towards the noise arising from the road transport work since yesterday morning. Since my home is located at starting of the street, people are passing by often irrespective of the time. I understand they are improving the damaged roads. However, there are couple of issues faced by our community due to this activity. Firstly, the work is being done 24 hours, apparently, there are lot of disturbances in the surrounding areas and I am not able to concentrate on my studies due to the unbearable noise produced. As my exams are scheduled next week, please arrange for some alternatives at the earliest.

Secondly, drilling machines are used late nights and we are not able to sleep properly owing to the large sound formed. I would suggest that the task is done for a stipulated time-frame from 10 AM to 8 PM instead of working 24 hours. Additionally, please arrange for more number of people since the work will be completely rapidly. Looking forward for a positive response.

Yours faithfully,
ZARA

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85128205128 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76295585367 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2422741128 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913682195853 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321565809369 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355506824757 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597446110315 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144678687073 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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