IELTS General Training - Writing Task 1Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A)Introduce yourself,B)Explain what the problem is,C)Suggest solutions

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Ali Jawad residing in street 25, G13/2 for the past 4 years. I am writing this letter to express my concern towards water accumulated in my street amid water filtration plant construction on the corner of the street.

Water filtration plant is under construction for last few days, I understand it is to facilitate people. However, residents of street are badly affected by mudding and water on street which is accumulated due to construction work. Firstly, roads are flooded and have been rendered impassable. Flooded street is causing inconvenience to people passing through. Secondly, a few people slipped and fell due to muddiness; as a result, 2 people got injured, and a few got their clothes dirty. Additionally, accumulated water is host to mosquitos which are big threat to people's health.

Considering above problems, I suggest to make proper arrangements to evacuate water out of street and complete work as soon as possible.

I hope appropriate measures will be taken soon on my request.

Yours faithfully,
Ali Jawad

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w got their clothes dirty. Additionally, accumulated water is host to mosquitos w...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17919075145 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98021587447 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630057803468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9650270275 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886322560015 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337307198876 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354230474207 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492722374377 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308101473584 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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