IELTS General Training - Writing Task 1Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A)Introduce yourself,B)Explain what the problem is,C)Suggest solutions

I am Jasica resides in Mumbai 25th street, coral bagh. I am writing this letter to express troublesome confront by the community due to infrastructural construction on roads.

Since this area is covered under your jurisdiction. I want to inform you that due to traffic congestion roads are still under widening progress. There are many challenges faced by the community. Firstly, the examination of neighbor's children be conducted by next week. Due to over noise and disturbance they are unable to prepare for examination. Secondly, many children are infected with heart disease and sleep disturbance.

I know work has to continue but I would be grateful if construction work scheduled in the stipulated time period as from 10.00 am to 6.00 pm. Further, I would like to recommend if it is possible to kindly arrange more workforce since the work completed rapidly.

Thanks for your concern. I look forward to your remedial action.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...frastructural construction on roads. Since this area is covered under your jurisdi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14379084967 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98070747099 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699346405229 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.281514293 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5833333333 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133532991481 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435041966324 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345114872274 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755625793924 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374884126686 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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