An International company is offering you a temporary job for work experience. Write a letter to apply for that. You need to explain,•Where did you find this information•Why you want this job•What is your qualification•Which position you want to ap

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An International company is offering you a temporary job for work experience. Write a letter to apply for that. You need to explain,

• Where did you find this information

• Why you want this job

• What is your qualification

• Which position you want to apply

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a science graduate, who actively look to heads up with career. Recently, while surfing through your company website it is noticed that, your organisation is looking for fresh graduates for various positions where my education is well suited.

As a rookie in scientific world, this opportunity would help to boost my career aspirations in different angles such as, improvement in scientific knowledge, technical skills, presentation skills, research methods and many more. Moreover, it would be a privilege to start my career and gain experience with one of the most successful organisations in the world.

Last month, I completed post-graduation in applied biological sciences from University of Manchester with an aggregate of 8.0 CGPA percentage. Furthermore, six months of internship at Cadila pharmaceuticals in oncology department was completed by me <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">as a part of the curriculum,</span>

As it mentioned in the website, there is an open place for research trainee where my acquired knowledge and skills would be the best fit. Hence, it would be highly privileged for me if you provide an opportunity as a trainee to kick off my future endeavours.

Awaiting for a positive reply from you at your convenience.

Yours faithfully,

Sd-/

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
... to kick off my future endeavours. Awaiting for a positive reply from you at your conve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, well, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68811881188 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59730712712 2.54303337028 141% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683168316832 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4696538451 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167889543487 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733235338948 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792495378393 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105542382312 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08403340035 0.0580467560999 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 8.37731958763 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 7.45979381443 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 8.71597938144 184% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.