Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing new office next to your apartment.In your letter•Introduce yourself•Describe the problems you are facing because of this•Suggest solutions

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Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing new office next to your apartment.

In your letter

• Introduce yourself

• Describe the problems you are facing because of this

• Suggest solutions

Dear sir /madam

I am a resident of Embassy apartment situated adjacent to your newly constructing office space and writing this letter to inform you the difficulties facing by me and family due to the ongoing building work.

The newly building tower causing several issues to my family since the first day of raising the work area. Firstly, the construction at night makes loud noise causing disturbance to my family especially my father and mother who are aged and facing cardiac problems. Secondly, the formations of dust impairs the air quality causing suffocation and other dust allergies which is life threatening. My concern towards the well being of my family compelled me to write this letter.

To overcome these issues, it is highly recommended to follow certain eco-friendly practices such as, use equipment’s which produce low noise and it is necessary to sprinkle water in order to prevent dusting. Furthermore, adhere to safety practices and educate the labors about measure to be taken while working in residential areas.

Hope this letter wold initiate to take appropriate steps for the well being of the residents against this problem

Yours faithfully,

Sd/-

Name.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 40, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended following'.
Suggestion: recommended following
... To overcome these issues, it is highly recommended to follow certain eco-friendly practices such as,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, well, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43979057592 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81656902019 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685863874346 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2936306494 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.875 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 4.34317383033 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174066950445 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703341899227 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859339896252 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111489767739 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912640272906 0.0580467560999 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 8.37731958763 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 8.71597938144 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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