You heard that there is a group of people doing unpaid work helping old people in the local community. Write a letter to the group. In your letter you should,
• Tell how you heard about the group
• Confirm the importance of their work
• Give details of what you can do to help.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am an employee who works for an international NGO which concentrates on the elderly population. It is with high privilege to understand diverse activities about your services offers towards the older people as well as wish to join your group.
Recently, going through one of the famous magazines, my eyes got stuck on the page featured about your activities offered to geriatric civilians which was highly commendable and rewarding.
Services provided by you and your member act as an eye opener the for younger generations including me. Elder people must need more attention and affection from their relatives. However, they were unattended these days by their dear ones due to other priorities and commitments. The assistance provided by your team is a great relief for them to keep up their physical and mental wellbeing.
As an experience personnel in geriatric care, I would like to join the team during late evening hours and Sundays to extend my arms for to improve the needs those unattended people. My acquired skills and abilities in health management will be an added advantage and it could enable us to guide them to lead a healthy and independent life.
It would be great if an opportunity is provided to join your voluntary work.
Yours faithfully,
Sd-/
Name.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am an employee wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22325581395 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80278776465 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6771707562 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.090909091 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128729933122 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487311304852 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411046123933 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685871035303 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495246812935 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.