A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
• describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
• summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
• say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear sir/Madam,
I am John, a resident of ‘New Colony’, Delhi. I am happy to know that you have decided to invest funds either in the Children’s sports team or in two open-air concerts. I am writing this letter in response to the request you have made for seeking public opinion.
I would like to bring to your notice and you would be surprised to hear that the under 19 football team of our locality had represented our state in the “Inter-State Football League”, and had won twice. Sponsoring such a talented team would bring more fame to your business and will also help the team to get funding for sports equipment.
On the other hand, paying for concerts has its own benefits. As the major section of this community comprises of youth, this kind of event would be immensely welcomed. As a result, more and more people will come to know about your company and will start buying your products.
Although investing in concerts is profitable, I would suggest you to put your money on the football team as this would be a win-win situation for your company as well as the players.
I hope you will be benefited by my suggestions.
Yours truly,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...orts team or in two open-air concerts. I am writing this letter in response to t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave made for seeking public opinion. I would like to bring to your notice and ...
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Line 6, column 101, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... As the major section of this community comprises of youth, this kind of event would be imme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78640776699 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79523988416 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577669902913 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.628270464 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6363636364 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25717174145 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941067044197 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758376183528 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123965745819 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811778439376 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.